Run mister!
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Created for the 'ng commercial contest' found here: http://www.newgrounds.com /bbs/topic/1328768
I was supposed to finish it before the deadline of 27 april after it was extended but i couldn't make it in time. I took to much on my plate. Next time i'll set my alarm to get it done early.
Watch it, rate it, feel it, snap it, zoom it, work it, up-grade it.
hahahahaha ohhh that was funny. That was worth the laugh. Excellent delivery dude.
Honesty time:
This wasn't that good. There wasn't anything memorable about it, and considering that I'm about six pints beers in, and I didn't even crack a smile, there's a problem here. It wasn't "bad," but it was pretty far removed from "good." I won't remember this tomorrow, and I won't care that I won't remember it. There, quite simply, was nothing of interest, humor, or otherwise was engaging to speak of.
Plebs responds:
I know we all like to be entertained when we watch something, but commercials are bound to be more informative than entertaining. As far as for the rest, i know what you mean. That there has got to be something special that captures your attention and makes you want to watch the movie again every once in a while. As far as that goes, i actually do have got worked out scripts memorable and enjoyable, how ever i have saved those untill i feel like my animation performance has catched up enough with my idea's.
Thank you for the review, i actually want more of these type of reviews so i know what to improve on.
its ok but you should look for some voice actors so you dont have just 1 guy doing 3 parts
Plebs responds:
I'm on it. Just doing voices myself when i don't need a particular person to be imitated in the flash. Otherwise i will be looking for some actors, but i see your point.
Why is the narrator talking so slow? Dont really need an answer just wanted to point that out. 5 stars anyway! Exellent work
Plebs responds:
I honestly didn't notice haha
