This isn't to bad honestly, i don't know how many views this has received and while seeing your profile has one other flash, i can't comment on the possible conditions for this creation. You got talent and i hope to see more work from you in the future, but next time, try not to mumble in place of words, while an inaudible story tells it all, the mumbling was a little grating on the nerves. Good work though, always room for improvement!