Bob certainly is having a rough day at the office isn't he? I'll open by saying that this is obviously heavily influenced by the Madness series by Krinkels. By the looks of it you have completely copied what Krinkels has drawn in his series but adapted it for your own purposes. It would be nice to see an animation from you with your own style without the use of Krinkels "crutches" heavily supporting your animation. It was very apparent in the smoke effect. However, you show potential. It's a great process learning to animate. Would love to see what you can do in the future!
Thanks... i guess? but i am gunna try using my Madness Combat guys and get the ropes then try my own style if that makes sence