Good:
- you had a plot
Bad:
- poorly drawn

Short, not well drawn, but a clear point behind it. The audio wasn't bad, clean up the animation, make it look less rushed. Maybe even extend the scene by a few seconds, show the bald man with a smoking gun standing over the dead woman lying next to the dead man, both with clearly seen bullet holes. Something of that nature. Otherwise, it wasn't terrible, but it wasn't great. A good stepping stone if nothing else.

This is just bad. Boring.
It was a good attempt at humor, but not funny. Characters aren't interesting. Build-up too quick, with the pay-off being too small.