Rape and murder...yay... There is no sound in the beggining or end. The animation was nice. You need a better mic set though in my oppinion.
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in case you didn't know yakmas day was an ep of ren and stimpy so technically it is a "newer holiday" compared to most holidays.
shut up it makes sense in my head...
btw some backgrounds look really shit because i ran out of time .
... im going to sleep now
Animation in the beginning looked good, but environments and details like hands could be worked on. Voice clarity was good and lip syncing was alright as well. Not bad but needs some improvement, keep working on it, you have a decent foundation.
visedgrub responds:
thanks for the feedback. i really agree with you about the environments, it felt random and you as a viewer never really got a sense of the room or how these rooms linked. but when i was making this i really tried to make sure it didn't get boring and you weren't just just watch a guy walking around for the majority of the cartoon. i wanted to get into the conversation as possible.
Always great to hear my voice!
I still must review it! It's a short one, but it's still very well animated (minus a few backgrounds), and I believe K and I do a fairly good job with the voice acting! The only issue is that I haven't been added to the project yet : P
But great to see more of your stuff grub!
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3.33 / 5.00
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