It's your first "better" flash animation, your real first flash animation had no sound, no lipsync and stick figures *shudders*, also then you used frame by frame animation for everything, didn't use movie clips etc. it was horrible.
Anyways, this was inspired by Ukinojoe or Ricepirate.
This has your worst attention to color/background/lipsync/
animation etc, so you can do a lot better than this. But I think this quickly made animation turned out quite good.
Not sure what I think about it, let me know.
how the hell did this pass judgement?any way i wont hold that against you. i see that you are knew to animation so ill tell you the stuff that helped me improve. when designing a charecter remember the following: ears, for a long time i did not draw ears and i wondered how the charecters did not turn out how i wanted, hair, make sure the hair is lifelike and lines overlap each other most in hair. get a favorite animatior, i have improved more in the past 4 months of animation then in the past few years now that i have a favorite animatior. watch plenty of livestreams, i watch alot of livestreams mostly jae the animator (search plungerdog and you will find him he has great livestream sessions),be pationt, you will find that drawing/ animation require SOOO MUCH TIME to improve. DONT BE LAZY, i think this is one of the most important tip. take critisicm, many people may be able to help you by telling you things you might have missed.
i hope i am not being mean i am trying to be as helpful as i can and i wish you much luck as an animator.
Really annoying, kinda dumb, and there's nothing really happening.