Well, the story seems pretty generic thus far, there are lots of low quality graphics, and, ahh, there's two lines in the screen...
And do you want me to help you with character designs?
Red Sonics are hardcore troll bait.
Author Comments
I just did this between certain flash projects. :P
And I was just sort of bored
DEVIANTART CREDITS
The original series is by tacumathehedgehog(newgrou nds) His youtube account is Taumasonic123. His deviant art is Tacumathehedgehog. (original episode is on his channel) Effects by blastimo36 (He doesn't own them I know that, he just led me to them :3) Tacuma sprites by tacumathehedgehog and MMZX G.U.N. Soldier by sigmatheplutonianfox
Tension by moi jjswiftproductions lol XD
Rest of credits in anim. :)
ENJOY!
JJSwift responds:
OMG! I haven't gone on newgrounds in ^ Thousand years. lol just kidding. The red sonic is not mines. Its just a friends. In fact this series was made by him. I just remade the episode. Thanks for the review though. :D
cool you remastered my video
JJSwift responds:
Yup. :D
VERY GOOD I ONLYBHAVE 2 PROBLEMS 1 ) ITS KIND OF BLURRY 2) TRY TO MAKE A SERIES OF THIS MOVIE I'LL BE WATCHING
JJSwift responds:
Thanks man. But the problem behind problem 2 is that this is not my series DX but I shall continue to remake each episode. :D
....what was that? the story wasn't really planned out. also it was a tad short. try using more explaining like when that new hedgehog guy said his name and it just ended. other than that stuff you did a great job with the sprite animations and HAD a good plot running for the beginning but then it got sloppy.
JJSwift responds:
Yeah. I noticed about the story line and plot, and I agree. lol But I didn't make the series, this was basicly for remaking purposes since the original was made on paint and windows movie maker, so I don't think there's anything I can do about the plot.(I guess I should have put all that in the authors comments but forgot) :( But anyways thanks for reviewing. :D
Scripting wa good. Action seemed iffy, could be more clear. Audio quality is poor. Very grainy.
Take out the stupid voice clips you have now again, either voice the entire thing or non of it.
JJSwift responds:
Thanks for the advice. Now I know what to do for my future anims