this is great made me laugh

totally shit :P i like it

Definitely needs more dicks. You can't submit something here without including a single dick.
Shame on you.

This had horrendous audio, choppy animation, and a nonsense plot in the terrible way.

Your style of art for it has some promise, but the whole of this needs insurmountable work before you can go anywhere with it.

needs to be a bit more detailed n longer. too fast to understand. Keep up the good work!