I understand that this was made very quickly, but the quality was sadly poor.
First off I have generally bad eyesight, but someone with perfect vision wouldn't have been able to see that tiny character moving along. The lines that make up this character need to be bolder, more catching to the eye so that the player isn't leaning forward in their seat, nose pressed against their monitor trying to see where they're going.
Secondly I understand that again, you made this quickly, but the dialogue was a little laughable. If it's supposed to be silly make it silly, to me it seemed like you were trying to be earnest but it just came across as a poor attempt.
Lastly it's a good concept, don't give up on it, I think it just needs a lot more time and a lot more effort. With a little bit of a push this can be something wonderful.
Yea thank you I will take what you said in consideration when I make the second one, I maid it quick so I could get a response to my idea. Now I can look for animators and expand on it
Okay, so I didn't like this game.
It's an old idea, way too old. Sure, it's not EXACTLY the same story as any one of the other games, but they're all slightly different. Thing is, that doesn't make them all unique. It's glitchy, and that screams amateurish.
Maybe I can't do better, maybe I can if I could be arsed to try. But that's not the point here, don't bring me into this. This is about you, and I'm giving you constructive criticism here: get a bit more practice, or try something different, because 'art' games are NOT a failsafe.
If you respond, do not change the subject into 'i made this in 4 hours' or anything, because I've got a solution: Make it in more hours. It's no excuse.
And for the record: I'm not a hater.
Yea I respect your point of view, I have a lot of practise and experience but this was only short for the feedback and to establish the characters briefly, There will be more longer and chalenging versions of the game coming out
Stupid sad endings! D:<
this is the hardest game i've ever played. i had to use a walkthrough and cheat engine to get through.
do you know if there's a website somewhere that can explain the ending to me? like cliffnotes style. it's too deep to comprehend.
i wanted to give it 6 stars for its incredible complexity, depth, and beauty. so i gave it 1 star. (6 mod 5 = 1), it's like i gave it 5, then 1 more which looped it around to 1. so don't view this as one star. it's 6.
If its the hardest game you have ever played you must be a idiot.
Yea there is couple of websites for simple people like you that help you get through a simple game like this.
Thanks for the review I will specially make some walk through s for you.
terrible game and if you are only going to spend 4 hours on a game you shouldnt make it at all put in a bit of effort when you make it and it seems very similar to a pretentious game
Yea I did base it on that idea but changed everything