Decent game. Good way to kill two minutes of my times. I thought it could have been longer though. It might be fun with a little added story and some variety, not just a depressing love chase. I do like the story but I think it should be spread out among a much larger flash, if that makes sense. Also, I thought you could have improved on the music. I like the piano and I think it sounds very nice but the actually audio quality is kind of low. It's fuzzy.
If this game was longer and had better audio quality it would be a really entertaining game! Keep it up!
Thanks I will take in what you said
It's somehow deep and intriguing. Not the best story, but I really liked it and had a good feeling through the game.
I understand that this was made very quickly, but the quality was sadly poor.
First off I have generally bad eyesight, but someone with perfect vision wouldn't have been able to see that tiny character moving along. The lines that make up this character need to be bolder, more catching to the eye so that the player isn't leaning forward in their seat, nose pressed against their monitor trying to see where they're going.
Secondly I understand that again, you made this quickly, but the dialogue was a little laughable. If it's supposed to be silly make it silly, to me it seemed like you were trying to be earnest but it just came across as a poor attempt.
Lastly it's a good concept, don't give up on it, I think it just needs a lot more time and a lot more effort. With a little bit of a push this can be something wonderful.
Yea thank you I will take what you said in consideration when I make the second one, I maid it quick so I could get a response to my idea. Now I can look for animators and expand on it
nice one thanks for the medal
You welcome, there will be more when the next one comes out