The effects were timed pretty good but the movie itself lacked a epic storyline to pull the viewer in it did have a plot but not a strong enough one but the animation was solid.

You fucking cheater.

cool shit

Pretty sick.

Everything looked smooth and consistent, audio and video effects were well synched.
Not much of a plot though, everyone dies, which will hurt the score I think...
Check around the Audio Portal for some voice acting clips or an audio play, you might find something inspiring.