The idea is just genius, but it feels like there's more potential for this. It ends at the right place, but it's gotta be missing something when I don't really get to laughing, sound effects maybe? Everybody looking at the guy who phrased the final words? I don't know, but it feels like the joke's wasted when nobody within the animation understands it. keep working on it!
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, I don't know, I kind of have a possible idea for it where I have some other scenes following this scene, so maybe it will work better like that. But maybe some of your ideas would be fun to experiment with too. I'll have to try a couple different things out and see what works. Glad you liked it though! :)
typical schoolyard stuff... well done. Too short, though. It could definitely be expanded upon. Fun concept.
Thanks! Yeah, I am actually considering expanding the idea a little in another animation. I've even started writing other parts of the script and have a basic idea for a longer version in my head, so look out for another animation because I'll probably make it eventually. :)
Not bad, but not really that great either.