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Ball Kill

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I know I'm a terrible person at animations, but I wanted to give it a try. This we something I did in the morning after watching some tuts, I have no background of any artistic skills at all, so constructive feedback would be greatly appreciative ^-^! I have lots of skits in mind, but need more practice before I uploaded any! Don't want to make a bad first impression, yamsayin? ahaha, okay well! See you in the future

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well, this is just a loop that you were probably practicing, so next time don't post this and post a full animation of yourself like this!!!

The rate on this wasnt bad but needed more to it you should exploring putting some more backgrounds into your animation though

yes...YOU ARE A TERRIBLE PERSOOOOOOOOOON
but i'll rate 2.YEAH

Nice frame-by-frame right there. The animation lacks a few inbetweeners in my opinion, but it's acceptable for a first.
The stick figure lacks arms at a few frames. Was that intentional?
The next step for you would be more frames, the environment and perspectives. One of the challenging aspects in animating.
I wish, you best of lucks. You have potential.

PotentialStar responds:

Adding in fine details was not something I accomplished on this animation, but I agree it was lacking a few inbetweeners! The Arms, should have been there, but I didn't really look in to that, though I should have :/! Thanks though! for the feedback, and comment :3

Hey, mate, don't forget the Loader from Newgrounds>Community>Downloads>Flash Loaders if you intend to do anything longer than this.

And I dunno, you seem to have some basic grasp on animation, but you know, you really gotta try and do something before ye upload. What you're uploading is a mini-mini-test. When you're only at the very early stages of animation and you're also not doing anything with it, it becomes much worse than being at very early stages of animations and actually doing a skit you wanna do. An interesting one.

This is not speaking from experience, but people like to say "Practice makes perfect" so I guess you can try that.

No stars, because I never knew how to rate mini-mini-tests.

Good luck, dawg.

PotentialStar responds:

Rating for this is not even important atm, but the feedback and advice is what I really wanted :)! For that, I appreciate the advice and tips you have given me. Thanks!

Credits & Info

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1,175
Votes
7
Score
3.51 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 7, 2013
9:29 AM EDT
Genre
Action
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