Nice start. A little music and some sound effects could go a long way to add some more feeling to it.
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First for real flash I've ever created, took me about 2 hours.
Created for my friends back home that are dear to my heart. I miss them so, and hopefully will be able to visit them soon.
I was also testing the waters for the rest of my animated series that I intend to possibly publish through Newgrounds.
The "I love you." sign is the replay button.
Tell me what you think, constructive criticism is always helpful.
Nice work dude! Your video was made from the concept of "I need to finish it quickly because somedays I'll show it to my friends" It's got a lot of symbols of "friendship" I gave it a high rating.
Needs sound. Why is his arm detached from his hand?
Overall the art looks decent and I'm sure you friends appreciate the tribute. You're heading in the right direction.
spikestreak responds:
It's not lol, in hindsight I suppose I should've put an outline around it, but his wrist is being covered by black sweatband. He wears one on both wrists. You can see an example at the end, when the hand appears signing "I love you". The green "blob" at the bottom of the hand is a sweatband, as if it were his own hand.
Thanks for your time and consideration to actually write a comment! I really do appreciate your criticism. :)