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Unfortunate Girl:TWO pt.1

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Uploaded
Mar 20, 2013 | 7:36 PM EDT
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After the death of her parents, Karissa tries to move on, though her past still haunts her.
The origins of the Karissa/Shawn duo are shown, while something sinister seems to be watching Karissa's day to day life.

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If the cartoon runs a little choppy on your computer, either buy a better computer or watch it on my Youtube channel linked in the loader screen!
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Hey, guys! So this actually just the FIRST part of this full episode. I reached Flash's 16,000 frame limit JUST at the end of the full episode, which was about 15 minutes long, so I had to cut it in half. So the pacing might seem a little rushed because of that, and for that I am sorry! I will upload part 2 as soon as I'm done giving it a final polish!

-Fabs

Reviews


AquabreezeAquabreeze

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Good god, this is amazing. I don't usually like horror-type films due to jump scares, but you don't use any, which is awesome. And I love this! I gotta ask though- is your art style influenced by Avatar: The Last Airbender? Shawn is a dead ringer for Aang, and Karissa reminds me a lot of Toph. I'm not suggesting you copied them (This is nothing like A:TLA, and even if it was, hey, not a bad thing to copy.) but did that influence how you drew/animated them at all?


TheFabs responds:

Definitely! I'm influenced by a lot of different stuff I like, and one of the biggest ones is Avatar. I find it has a nice balance between Western and Eastern styles that I think fits well for the vision I'm going for, so I used it for reference on noses, eyes, and other random stuff.


LouWegaLouWega

Rated 5 / 5 stars

DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW LONG I WAITED FOR THIS THING TO COME THROUGH???
I literally stalked your profile for about TWO YEARS! When you said you were going to stop making flash animations I was really dissapointed... then you said you wouldn't and I was happy again. Still this took quite a while. But let me tell you. It was friggin' worth it. Please, never, EVER stop making these marvellous animations. You are one of the best I have ever seen. Thanks for giving us this amazing story. The best of lucks to you young girl.



elix67elix67

Rated 5 / 5 stars

This was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!! I have two questions though. Why are karissa's eyes pure white where the rest of her family have normal eyes? And do we find out what happened to the little sister? I noticed she wasn't a part of the memory from the windmill.



mrermelmrermel

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Karissa: Have you been stalking me?
Shaun: Maybe...

This short film is so amazing it should be on Disney Junior! XD

Feedback: Great animation, music and sound it gave me the chills I am looking forward to the next part I need to know more of the story line...



ExtraDanExtraDan

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Great job, I was witing for it a lot.
Really amazing how Max and Mega64 supported you.
Facinating animation and writing.
But the only thing I didnt like, its Shon's voice.
Its pretty lound and annoying for a horror toon. a deeper whispery voice could get along with the toon.


TheFabs responds:

Well, Shawn is supposed to be a ray of light in this dark story. He is an upbeat guy and helps Karissa through her sadness and makes her into something bigger and better, mentally. He's gotta sound like it!