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Unfortunate Girl:TWO pt.1

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After the death of her parents, Karissa tries to move on, though her past still haunts her.
The origins of the Karissa/Shawn duo are shown, while something sinister seems to be watching Karissa's day to day life.

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If the cartoon runs a little choppy on your computer, either buy a better computer or watch it on my Youtube channel linked in the loader screen!
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Hey, guys! So this actually just the FIRST part of this full episode. I reached Flash's 16,000 frame limit JUST at the end of the full episode, which was about 15 minutes long, so I had to cut it in half. So the pacing might seem a little rushed because of that, and for that I am sorry! I will upload part 2 as soon as I'm done giving it a final polish!

-Fabs

Reviews


Really good.



im confused but in a good way lol



ok i have no idea whats going on theres a girl and a war? anyway i still like it also on another note if she had white coloured eyes wouldnt you still be able to see her pupils? meh just a thought nice work



The animation was really good, and it does resemble Avatar. The voice actors did a fine job as well. There wasn't much in terms of plot, mostly because it was so short and there wasn't time to develop one, so no complaints there. Although there is room for a very good plot, the way you're going, there is a LOT of room to mess up and miss your mark by miles, so be careful with that.



Pretty well-made. But I do need some corrections with the story: Shawn and the girl are friends from episode one and this episode shows how they met right? And we don't know what happened after the guy with the mask right?
Anyway, the story is great and the drawings are even better. Reminds me of the drawings of Avatar. I would give 6 starts if possible because even though I had a bit of a hard time understanding the story, I love scary stories and anime/anime-like stuff. You got them all.


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Score
4.45 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 20, 2013
7:36 PM EDT
Genre
Drama
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