Messing around in flash I try to animate one of my OCs... Giving her a League of Legends kit. And just having fun. Good practice for more things to come.
Tidy animation, good idea, and that character would be nice to see in LoL.
I would've given this a higher mark if it wasn't for the YouTube part.
A submission on Newgrounds has to be specific to the site, at least IMO (or at least not mentioning any channel on YouTube)
Adding a bit of color would've been nice too.
All in all, its a good start.
The beginning was boring. Once the girl showed up and some real animation and movement started, then it had some interest. The problem was that there isn't much that's interesting here. This isn't a story. It's an explanation. That's like someone reading you the instruction booklet from a set of shelves.
"This is Pi. First, she opens the box and gathers her tools. Next, she lays out boards A and F. Then, carefully hammering the nail, she installs shelves B, C, D..." See? Just not all that interesting.
Actually, this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.
Good luck! :)