You have a sense of cinematic storytelling and I hope you continue to make animations. I don't care much for the content but that's just me. Your animation could use alot improvement. Thankfully, on newgrounds there is forum with plenty of good advice and people out there who will help you out. I rated this low because I felt that quality is low. I hope you continue to make animations despite what I say or anybody else says. Good luck to you dude!