00:00
00:00
Newgrounds Background Image Theme

Snoring

Share Collapse

Author Comments

Hi there.

This is my very first flash attempt. Advices welcome. This is where it all begins ^^

Log in / sign up to vote & review!

Newgrounds accounts are free and registered users see fewer ads!

Superb storytellling :D
Seriously, it's a good start.

8/10
5/5
it was pretty good for a first timers animation and it had the expreienced event of the play button added in through yourself and not through newgrounds so thats good, it shows you know how to work with events well enough. artwork is reminiscent of the artwork of fulps. i couldnt really say anything about the animation but from waht i could it seemed to be decent but try adding another frame in so the head and wahtever else your using travels smoother, of course this requires more work but with a very good outcome.

Good luck,
From an old man named, poliky

gOrc responds:

thank you, I'll keep that in mind.

it was short but good, you should have different variations of him snoring

Credits & Info

Views
1,334
Votes
4
Score
4.09 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 16, 2013
1:24 PM EDT
Genre
Experimental
Tags