This is pretty good just like the previous ones.
It has great detail, in the layouts and the characters.
The animation of the characters are a wee-bit janky.
A bit of shadow would do wonders to everything.
All in all, I say great effort.
thanx buddy I really appreciate your advice. Yeah I should do more tweaking to smooth things out and I definatly need to add more shadows. Cheers.
Plz don't continue.....
if it is the story you don't like then i can't help you there because I am continueing.
If it is technique you don't like or any other elements in my work I would have appreciated some advice on how to improve. From your comment I have learned NOTHING
This series is SOOOO good! Keep em coming! :D
thanx for having a looksies buddy I really appreciate it.
I've really enjoyed these small, but serious episodes from the start. Voice acting and realistic detail is well above par, as is the story line (love the Superman II reference!) It looks like it could benefit from post-processing, like adobe after-effects, but the heart of a great story is unfolding! Frame rate of the action could also be kicked up a notch, but one person can only do so much, and I do find this to be a serious work from a competent and capable author/animator.
Watch these from the start, and you will find a light in the darkness.
hey there buddy thank you for your sweet comment. Oh lol you recognize the superman two influences in this. you are very observant. Maria was definitely inspired by Ursa because she is such a classy she- jerk along with Zod when I thought of Maria the very first time I imagined her with short dark hair and then I remembered Ursa. Lol she must of been hidden there in my subconscious. But your words are very encouraging and I appreciate it very much. I should have to look into after effects and see what this is. I am most curious. thanx again buddy. I love to tell stories hee hee.