My only advice would be is if you plan on using text use text boxes at the top of bottom. Don't over lap the characters with the text. Good job overall though

Everyone Ignored Luigi Till Now D:

This has potential. If you do this more frequently, then you'll be great. What I didn't like was the ending. It was very spontaneous and felt rushed. But since you made this for a friend of yours, then I guess it's just okay.

It was very entertaining. I hope, you will post more here.

I'm a huge Mario fan, and this was pretty decent. The only thing is that the ending seemed a little abrupt and as if Luigi didn't even plan for bob-omb to show up.

So yeah, it was indeed pretty laggy. You could download a preloader from newgrounds, but theyve removed that option since the redesign i think...

So yeah, the story was a bit low, but so you could focus on the action.

But yeah, there weren't really many other sprites fighting other than luigi and bowser, and their moveset wasn't as full of attacks as in other sprites movies (SMBZ or TTA etc.).

But (I guess) this is an awesome birthday present, so keep on working!