I feel it insulted teachers that are trying. Some aren't good but some are .
Well at least it wasn't long...... Had a little humor
1. get someone to do the art
2. make a longer script but first get #1 done
3. Add some music or sounds. I know it's harder to do it with flash.
4. Just get some help
From a true brony
Good luck on the next submission!
Wait, wait, wait. Are you sure this is a game? I mean, first of all, I had NO IDEA what the game was about! Come on man. It seemed like there was no storyline at all! And if there was, I did NOT understand it! And it's just boring gameplay. Click here, click there. Don't look at me like that. I absolutely love point 'n click games. But since I didn't understand what the heck this game is all about (except for the title), it was too plain, too boring. And there's no music! At all! Games SHOULD have music, crappy or not. That just adds to how boring it is to play this game. No music equals no fun. And then there's the grand finale. THE GRAPHICS. Man, you gotta fix this. The graphics was just all over the place which also adds to how boring the game is. And is also the reason we have no idea what we're playing. I didn't go here to send the hate, I went here to play a game that I expected would be pretty good. So don't take this as offensive. I'm just trying to give you some advice. I suggest you try to collaborate with an artist and a musician to help you out, and learn some programming if you could (or, if you do know how to program, try polishing up your skills). I'm sorry, man. There was just nothing good about this game. I have to give you no stars. :/ You might say, "But this is my first game.". But I just can't see the effort put in. Maybe make a simpler game for your first game. :)
DUDE i will do art 4 u next time if u want
I'm just gonna be strait forward, this game is not good. but i encourage you to keep at it.