Wow actual effort... until the end in which the entire art scheme goes down by about thirty notches.
You had jokes, smooth non jittery as crap characters, and no annoying gimmick that makes my eyes bleed.
Dare i say you tired.
The ending is very symbolic in my view.
It fits very well to the entire motif of your previous uploading habits.
Keep up with the getting better part, and you will start to see better and better reviews.