I admire your artistic and creative insight,this movie evoked several different emotions and was a treat to watch.I don't have much criticism to get into but i'm not well-versed on this genre so i'd pretty much just suggest a little more fleshed out characters next time.But then again the ambiguity kinda served them well here.Take that for what you will but at the end of the feature i thought you did a pretty good job.
WHY ISINT THIS 5 STARS?!?! THAT WAS THE BEST THING I HAVE EVER SEEN ON NEWGROUNDS BRAVO MAN BRAVO 10 STARS!!!WOOT
The art was fairly well done and the music fit very well with the mood. I thought this was more of a scary story than anything else, though, and the only thing I really thought was creative was the idea of a glowing light monster. I agree that the monster was drawn a bit clumsily and seemed a bit funny, but I found the film scary and sort of sad nonetheless.
I personally don't feel this film is anything super special but it's good nonetheless.
That monster was anti-climactic\. The mouth diverted from the art style and just made it look goofy. Still was incredibly amazing.