I really liked the style. I even laughed out loud a couple of times at the end (I just find the concept of "local staring contest" really amusing) and the atmosphere was nice and creepy and all that jazz.
However the lack of menu or replay option is kinda annoying because the animation loops and all the sounds get really mixed up together on the second play. You can download preloaders right here from Newgrounds really easily and just put those at the beginning of the animation.
But if you're not lazy like I am you may figure it out how to make those yourself :)