You Seriously need to get some help

While your voice is beautiful you do realize that this is more of a flash site? You got a half a star merely because of your singing nothing else. If this was youtube than i would have given you a "like". Excluding that your lyrics are ok they need just a slight work, and maybe a faster pace beat, because this song is more entwined with heavy metal lyrics which is fine, but the slow pace causes it to lose all its meaning.

Looks like some bad montage and video effects. Why would you make a "music video" with a webcam? There's barely any flash work (or any work at all) put into it, your singing is very unclean and the whole song sounds like it was recorded with a PC mic. The music is too low in the mix (but there's no mix, right?) and seems to be just a loopy skeleton of an actual track. Also, I'm not sure if "looking in the mirror my reflection fades" is even a correct grammatical structure, but even if it was, it's unsightly.

I'm not a darkminded person, so this really wasn't appealing or funny to me. The resolution was grainy. The singing wasn't bad, but it wasn't really good either. Sorry. :\

Now, you do know that Newgrounds is for animation and games, right?

The occasional 'real video' does come thru, but the score usually suffers here.

This is better suited for youtube. :\