Alright the animation was okay, but the background and the houses can be improved somehow... not bad but, You can make this a bit longer and I can assure you.... that you could make it interesting and cool!
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Tim is just a kid who gets tempted by his demons because of some ugly girl. I really didn't think about her apperance. But Tim seems to like her so more power to him. Why do kids try dumb things on their trampolines? Don't they know something bad could happen?
It was nothing new
good but it was too short but i still liked it
Great character design along with an ok animation but both soundeffects and voices were terrible. Your work would benefit greatly if you just put more effort in the sound. Also script, I didn't feel this had any thought at all on what was happening. Your drawingstyle looks good and dynamic which fits the medium perfectly.
I thought it was very entertaining.