Left me with a smile on my face.
The first scene was weak, but as soon as the snowflake was introduced, it got really interesting. Voice acting was pretty good and it made me laugh. the dog was drawn pretty well too. Very good quality of effects too. Try not to repeat sounds, like the weeeee in the beginning and the waaaah when he was getting pissed on.
Not really into the ambulance ending though. if it ended at I'm melting would have been just fine.
Keep it up!
I came here coz I saw your post in the animation forum, do make more animations you have a very good start!
Thanks! Also the ending was suppose to allude to something else that was very subtle earlier on in the movie. Good call on the repeated sounds, I got lazy. I used a friend's very nice microphone to record them all at once. Thank for everything by the way, very helpful!
I enjoyed it. It was pretty funny and the art was good. The sound quality (voice acting, SFX, music) were good too. I also likedthe snow flake's eye twitch effect.
A couple of tiny things I think could have been improved:
1) The shadow from the "Clint Eastwoof's" (hilarious name by the way) drool, looked like a urine shadow, so it kind of killed the potential for a surprise when the dog actually urinated.
2) The motion tween of one of the skaters flipping looked weird, he just disappeared for a second like thin paper.
3) A little leg movement for the skaters would have mad eht eice skating scene a little better.
Still, all in all very entertaining and funny. By the way, I read your post on the BBS, way to stick to your deadline. (something I wish I could do) :)
I really appreciate the review, all of this is very helpful. Thanks!
Not bad. Nice lip sync to :P
Thanks, I made sure lip sync was perfect. Although I decided not to make a mouth for major syllables. That would have taken much longer.