Left me with a smile on my face.
The first scene was weak, but as soon as the snowflake was introduced, it got really interesting. Voice acting was pretty good and it made me laugh. the dog was drawn pretty well too. Very good quality of effects too. Try not to repeat sounds, like the weeeee in the beginning and the waaaah when he was getting pissed on.
Not really into the ambulance ending though. if it ended at I'm melting would have been just fine.
Keep it up!
I came here coz I saw your post in the animation forum, do make more animations you have a very good start!