Was super short. Needs sound effects and some sort of story. Why am i there? Why should i care? That sort of thing. Gravity was a little weird needed some float time to the jumps instead of spazy up and down movement. Also maybe a sign on lvl 1 telling me to move right.

There is no music, the game is full of misspellings, and it doesn't feel like I accomplished anything. This game needs a lot of improvement.

I was actually enjoying this as far as crappy dialog and nice game play matters. But then it ended way too fast. Better luck next time.

"Level omplete"
It seems this game was barely tested and you just slapped this onto newgrounds without even playing it first
You move extremely slowly and when you jump you go high up really fast, its really strange
the camera is pretty bad too.

Lots of typos, and only two levels hold back this game from being amazing, but very fun.

4 stars