great joke. maybe amp up the animation of the characters.
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A cartoon who relate to the time the sky calls you gay.
It was cute, but a little short.
LovelyMuffinToons responds:
There really isnt much else to put in a video thats pretty much a dick joke. Ill make other videos longer
Promise <3 /kiss
great... but you seem to think that people like what they see in clouds... if that were true, a lot of people like sheep
Not bad! for a short would have been better if it was bit more polished, ex. cleaner lines, and more time spent on the clouds rather than copying and pasting the same one. but the foundation of a good short is here
LovelyMuffinToons responds:
Yeah, Im not the BEST animator in the world. I really need to practice slowing down and making the drawings and shapes themselves look nicer. But hey, its all about practise and improvement. Thanks for the review.
cheers
-Cam
that flower cloud is pretty. that second cloud was immature. keep up the awesome work.
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