so on a technical the game is functional , the story is absent but that is ok this is an arcade game not a platform game. the sound effects are somewhat interesting, i think it might be nice to have a little more substances to the sound or ambiances of some kind but this is a miner gripe, the controls work spot on so all i can say is that you have a good game. it wasn't to my taste but i'm not here to dictate my feelings to anyone.
i did really like your pixel work, and that is about all i can say. so.. thank you for your hard work and i look forward to seeing what you post in the future.