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So I recently started animating. I made my first cartoon 3 weeks ago and this is my second one.

I appreciate every kind of constructive criticism and advice.

Also I suck at formating, rendering and shit so if someone could help me out there. I know the measures on this one are horrible.

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i ..... its........ its ju.... WHAT THE FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!

This video had a few flaws to be sure, but it was *really* funny in any case. For being a beginner, your art isn't bad. You certainly have a way to go, but with practice and time you'll refine your style and things will start look smoother and cleaner. For the most part the voice work was good, but Ash's little monologue about how shitty Pikachu is was a little long-winded. Still, the ending was great and overall I liked it.

stonex responds:

thanks a lot, I appreciate both criticism and compliments :)

lmao! alright now this was funny xD
while you still need some work as far as animation goes, you've done a very good job. the audio is very good, and the humar was just priceless. i look forward to your 3rd cartoon

Get funky mit meinem Pokeballs

Good stuff. I fucking hate Oak and all those other professor fucks that deny my right to use bikes in houses! KILL THEM ALL!!!

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Jan 19, 2013
9:18 PM EST