The art wasn't completely awful, but that's about it.
The primary jokes are rehashed, the voice acting wasn't bad - but low quality, and the comedic timing was god awful.
Everything was so... drawn out. It was hard for me to even watch the entire thing.
You have some level of potential, but you can't rely on funny faces and shock value you to win everyone over. You need to work on your comedic timing, as well as your comedic quality.
As for art? You need more depth. Some shading, highlights, the likes. Your style isn't bad at all, but it looks very bland without either thicker lines, or a lot more detail.
I can see you're going for a Jhonen Vasquez look, but try to redevelop it into your own style.
Thanks for the feedback love!
I don't think I relied on shock value though. There was a well thought out story to it that justified everything shocking about it. I think when some people see things that are shocking they immediately write it off as something 'relying on shock' to get by and I think that mentality is ignorant. And as for not being able to win everyone over with it, I think I just did. No tea no shade <3
ok what drugs are u on how did u come up with thease sickning animations .. but i must agree great anmations
Mostly cocaine. Just kidding I don't do drugs! Drugs are for the cool kids.
(TT^TT) none of them deserve that.
True! Except maybe that asshole pikachu in the shower.
i dont know why but next time i'll play pokemon-red i'll pick bulbasaur!!
Yea I think everyone who watched this will
Great animation! Not sure if it was just because of the lavender town song that is freakiest tune in existence, but this flash might actually give me nightmares 0_0. Great job LOL!