With all due respect, dear author, but your submission had many flaws that somewhat, did break my immersion in this game, so I'll be willing to list them below, in case it might be helpful for future works;
The grammar presented in the flash had MANY errors, and was made even worse together with the overdramatic(and bad acted) player dialogue, which did NOT sound natural;
I'm not much of a fan of 8-16 bit submissions, but the art presented was pretty good, aside of the weird movement animation, which felt pretty rushed to me;
As said previously, the overdramatic player quotes would ruin most of the eerie and scary enviroment and elements, which, in certain cases, were quite predictable;
Howe er, the idea, the concepts, the sounds and the enviroment were great, specially the music and the ambiency.
But listen, I'm not here to mock your work and make you feel bad, instead, I'm trying to make a constructive aproach towards the content you are showing.
This is a very good game.. i totally like pixel games..please create more games like this and newgrounds will totally rock the world! :D
Thanks for your review and I'm glad you liked the game, other games soon... ;)
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Has to be the best game ever. It really deserves its place in the art games category. Its just amazing, Pure greatness, And Once again, The best game ever.
Thank you for your positive review and I'm glad that you enjoy the game! :D