Okay so you want CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, based on what you said to S678bloodymary?
Okay, here's some ideas for ya
-Make your own content. Don't rip off images of random websites. Actually try contributing some of your own art. And hey, if you can't draw, team up with someone and show us what you CAN do. I mean, if you had done the exact same video but with your own drawings, I would at least give you two stars- but stealing ain't cool.
-Use your own voice acting. There are plenty of home remedies to getting good quality sound out of a shitty microphone- there's seriously no excuse to using these annoying ass voices.
Wanna know what you did RIGHT? I actually appreciate that you edited this video and put the whole thing together. Shitty as it is, you did something YOU liked and put it up- that's how art starts.
Just remember that A SHITTY JOKE can be hilarious, but SHITTY QUALITY is always just annoying and bad. I hope this gets blammed so you can start over, buddy.
Of course I want constructive crticiism in a REVIEW. According go the official Newgrounds guidelines that people agreed to but at the same time violated, that's what a REVIEW is ALWAYS supposed to be. If you're not going to leave an actual REVIEW in the REVIEW section, then don't write anything or else you are at risk at receiving punishment.
Thank you for your review. but it already passed judgement so it cannot be blammed.
that was retarded as shit
You have broken the official Newgrounds reviewer guidelines which you agreed to. The official guidelines read:
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stephen hawking in a blender with a dial up modem not funny
It's overdone, and it ain't funny any more. Not that it ever was funny.
Giving criticism would be a waste.
No effort at all from the uploader to make this remotely funny. It's hard to discern what's going on with the automated voice program, there's literally no animation, it's repetitive, and I daresay it may well be offensive to homosexuals.
Is what I would say if I was to do an actual review of this. Instead, I'll say this. It fulfills the requirements for being a troll piece, but it lacks the class to be a good one. I hope the reactions you get to this video will give you a kick, because it certainly won't give me one, despite my fondness for trolling.
If you're not going to do an actual review in the review section then you're violating the review guidelines and are at risk of having your account deleted.
"Remember, you're submitting a REVIEW for this CONTENT. This isn't a place for you to make smug jokes, post stupid nonsense, or act like a total jerk."