Try voice acting. It's a lot better than this Microsoft SAM crap xD And spend more time on the art. I'm suprised you got this high of a score from everybody else! 0_0 Keep working on it. You'll get better. But don't post stuff like this to Newgrounds.
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Cookie tells Toad what to do while she goes out do some things.
SavvyOverDog responds:
Easier said than done.
Just like real life.
SavvyOverDog responds:
Real life feels so static to me..
This automated voice/crap animation has been done to death. Try real voices and real faces and get off the bandwagon. this style is not funny or entertaining outside of the group you're in. Ask your "real" friends, not on the internet...they'll tell you it's not funny...hopefully :P
SavvyOverDog responds:
Real faces? Real voices? Go to youtube good sir. You'll find real faces..and voices.
I don't understand your review elaborate more cause it seems that what you're only good at by skimming your reviews.