With how short part 1 is I feel like this definitely didn't need to be a 2 parter but other than that, it was pretty decent.
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What happens when Kombo goes to a parade? As usual, something bad happens.
Animation: Michael and Quinn
Additional Inbetweens: Gunboy
Backgrounds: Captain, Gunboy
Music: Quinn, Ruben, Kevin Macleod
Voices: Kombo, Quinn
Sound Effects: Soundjay, other websites.
Kombothekid responds:
There will be a part 2. It will be much longer. About 2 minutes. :) Its coming hopefully tomorrow. :)
wasn't bad voice acting could be better though.
Kombothekid responds:
The thing with my voice was, i was going to record the lines by myself, but for some reason, it wouldnt let me send the lines (except for the first line), so Quinn (the animator) recorded the lines with Audacity which made them have a TERRIBLE quality to them. Yeah.
This has potential, but the sound is killing you. Here, watch this:
VO Home Studio : Space by RicePirate
http://www.newgrou nds.com/portal/view/590285 (Remove the space. Or, it's in my favorites).
It's a great vid, and it'll help you tremendously.
Kombothekid responds:
The thing with my voice was, i was going to record the lines by myself, but for some reason, it wouldnt let me send the lines (except for the first line), so Quinn (the animator) recorded the lines with Audacity which made them have a TERRIBLE quality to them. Yeah.
Pretty cool and I'd like to check it out when the new parts are up. But I think this was far to short to even make a 'Part 1'. It seemed more like a trailer length. Each part should be at least a good few minutes. Especially since this is the first part, you'll want the audience to get a more detailed idea of what's happening. Otherwise, I enjoyed it and like where it's going, but personally, I think if you wait until you've created more content before you release each piece, people will be more interested in following you.
Keep it up!
Kombothekid responds:
Thanks for the constructive criticism! :) We'll follow your advice. There is new 4 episodes already written and they are around 2 and a half minutes long. Hopefully that will make it more better. :) Thanks though! :)
