Ive been watching the stuff you have put up and I find it to be really good. Some of the humor.......eh... could be better. But, for the most part, its really good. I had to comment on this one as the ending is perfect. I would ditch the ad thing though. That adds a bit more to the file size and is a bit annoying. While I do understand you are trying to promote your site, I think the toons themselves are advertising enough. Why not put the web page on your profile page? And the youtube link is useless as well.