Too wonderful~ I thought it was a Nazo article!?WWW

it's a very nice start, and it has potential, but Platinum stole Shadow's thing, if I were Shadow I'd be pissed

I thought your voice in the beginning was a bit unnecessary, also a bit annoying.
On the other hand the rest of it comes off as a bit cheesy, but enjoyable none the less.

The story line seems interesting so far, but I saw alot of glitches. remake this, and fix the effects.
Although I can't wait to see full ep. and can't wait to see Mega Man characters! XD

Has potential, please above everything else develop your sound a bit - for someone wearing headphones being blasted with white noise every couple of minutes is somewhat painful. Just keep your kbps up in the publish settings and if you think a specific sound effect is too loud, lower its volume (too many loud sounds at once can overload and cause the overall audio out to clip).

Also, you may want to put a message at the beginning that the user has to hit space bar to move through the dialogue - it's not too obvious.