Cute
So this was pretty "CUTE" the "MUSIC" was pretty good aswell, the female voice was really welldone so props to that voice actor, the animation in this was just right and you presented a fun story even the ending had some slight humor about it, as for any improvments not sure with this one seems like it doesnt really need any, anyways nice work here hope to see more of your work sometime soon.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
for any improvments not sure with this one seems like it doesnt really need any
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