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Chance and Ineptitude 1

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Abby walks around the cold streets of an old town, what will become of her this time?

Wow, never thought I'd put the next one up.
Anyway long story with this. Last October I finished editing the script and editing the panels for this chapter. Celx helped with the programing, and of course he had other things to take care of so this was pushed aside. I forgot about this until he brought it up a few months ago. It's going to be divided into 4 parts, and this chapter will conclude.
The art is VERY outdated in this. The rest of the parts will have the outdated are, but when the third chapter comes it'll look more like what I've been putting out.
Anyway I hope you all enjoy. More to come.

Again thanks for all the help Celx.


wow. what an eleborate art piece. it is just that i couldnt understand how this works, but then i realize after a few slides. i under stand it to be like a comic, storyboard art kinda thing. i love the art, the suspense and everything. love it. produce more and im sure youre enjoying doing this.keep up the good work.

linda-mota responds:

Many people are saying they have trouble understanding what's going on, I've been working on that with my drawings. Thsnk you for the nice comment though. :)

its a comic.... so, not much in the way of animation, but the arts unique.

The music! It's beautiful.
The story was engaging. (and could likely pass as rated T)
Artwork is subjective, but I sometimes had trouble discerning exactly was going on in a given shot, which made the story slightly confusing.
I love the interactivity of the menu, once I got a grasp of it.
I wish more submissions were like interactive books. You get artwork, interactivity and music in this format. Nice job!


linda-mota responds:

Since this was in 4 parts, I kept thinking of the whole story overall since it involves some nudity and violence. Not so much this part so I think I'll change it, you brought up a good point.

You are very kind. Thanks for you time. :)

i love your style, CJ. I couldn't pass up a chance to see something you'd drawn. This is fantastic so far, props to you and the other creator.

linda-mota responds:

SUNNI! I didn't know you had a NG account here! How are you?

The music is good. Some of the pictures were very confusing, atleast I couldn't tell, what to see in them.
However, I liked the idea...
Well, cannot figure anything else to say right now =D Atleast this was a good start.

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3.46 / 5.00

Dec 3, 2012
5:19 AM EST