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My Future...

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This my first full length animation that I had completed for a college project so yeh its kinda crap, but I enjoyed making it though and wish to improve my animation skills in the future (oh what a stupid pun).

I welcome criticism to help me improve my animation, would really appreciate it thanks :D

Animation by me, thespazicat http://spottedming.tumblr .com/
and the music was composed by my good thing Ruaridh Bakke https://www.youtube.com/u ser/UltimateSonicFan0001

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These products of a lost era bring quite the nostalgia.

Congrats on your first animation getting recognition!

Like everyone else has mentioned, the audio is a problem, but your character design and expressions are really great.

Much luck in... The Future (echo) uture... uture... uture...!

Not a bad little animation, but the sound a weak point. There are a couple of ways that you can prevent that audio spiking that occurs when you spit your "p" sounds into the mic:

1) hold a piece of thin cloth or even a post-it note up between your mouth and the microphone when you've got trouble consonants like "p". If you do it correctly, you can prevent the rush of air that crashes the mic without losing the annunciation.

2) turn down the audio-input a little, and then fiddle with the output level to get it as loud as you can before going in to the red. This will prevent input spiking so that you don't get that crackling distortion.

I thought it was cute.

I liked it all since the beginning untill the ending. Grat job! What to improve: nothing. Keep up the good work and make more videos please.

Sound quality was the low point for me. Maybe hire a voice artist?

I don't think you should watch this.

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4.61 / 5.00

Nov 29, 2012
3:41 PM EST
  • Daily 4th Place December 1, 2012