hell je brony vor life!!
Your animation is poor and ponies are awesome. The story isn't engaging, either.
Really shouldn't have given it three whole stars then, huh?
In this gay forest in this gay land in a gay city and ponies wich are gaaaaay.XD
I like it,coz of my name.
...Wow. You aren't too bright, are you?
lol cool but need to be made longer .
It was five minutes yo.
If I can give one piece of constructive criticism, it would be the volume of your voice when you're screaming. I see this all the time, and the "quiet yelling" NEVER sounds good. I understand you probably have neighbors/roomates/parents/whatever around, but when a scream is warranted, just do it. Warn anyone who might here you in advance if you have to, just DO NOT try to scream quietly, it always sounds awful.
Other than that, a nice concept you got working on. Good luck
Thanks for the advice!