I've always loved Legends of Dragoon (have re-played that so many times back in the day when it came out). Though I confess I hardly recall the storyline at all, I instantly recognized the music, dragoon form, and even 2-3 characters you were representing with the stick figures. Definitely pleased that you chose to recognize and tribute this old game for your competition. Been awaiting it's recognition since forever (it's nearly as good as FF7 & FF8 in my opinnion, top-accolades by most any RPG fans out there who gave it a shot [anyone reading this should go check this game out if they never tried it back in the PS1 days]).
Critique: My only critique of the animation is as one of the other reviewers pointed out, which was Lloyd not fighting back more. Would have been more entertaining if he attacked more, or dodged, or did something other than get hit repeatedly by everyone.