i really like the humor, and your style of art, but the animation could've been a bit better. solid backgrounds and the voice acting was good! i'd like to see where it goes, keep up the good work!
Thought the writing was really funny. I'm not crazy about the character design. Especially since the characters have personality and conflict with each other it'd be nice if they varied more.
"you can run and tell that--" haha, nice. decent animation, good sound, good plot. well done.
Animation was nice and smooth. Story was decent. Pretty good flash.
After watching the first episode I decided to watch all your older episodes and I saw one same problem over and over again. Pacing. It is way to fast. The jokes, which are good, are coming way too fast one after another and I can't enjoy them to the fullest. You really should improve on that.
The voices were slightly better than in the first episode, but just slightly. Actually, voices are not the problem, it is the way the lines are said. It feels like voice actors are just reading from the cue cards and not really voice acting.
The animation remains good, simple yet effective. The script is solid and most of the jokes hit rather then miss.
Also the fact that it came rather fast after the first episode is great.
I hope you will improve on this and I seriously can't wait for the next episode :)