love the story, funny but the expletives was unnecessary, despite it was cut out and replaced with the beeps but good job love the story
The most awesome flash i have seen on NG in a couple of weeks... good job.
Nicely done! Good solid work, decent sound, good timing. A little unpolished, but exciting and entertaining. I'll watch more!
The story was good and the writing wasnt too bad. It had humor and a great main character.
Audio quality could use a bti of work, but the video itself was weell made, written and drawn. Great job all around!