I can't figure out what the hell is going on in the story. Much of the dialogue has been crunched together and it's going by too fast for me to even read. (Except the short sentences.)
The music choices don't match nor are they synced with any scenes. The only thing that semi-seems to play properly is the wind - but it is not necessary to have wind and music mixed together. Makes the entire thing sound like crap.
The dialogue itself looks horrible, I have only seen.. 3 lines that did not look like an eight year old wrote them.
Also your flash is constantly freezing up. The very beginning I had to refresh just to make the damn thing start (and repeat a f2 more times before I even reached Jupiter's scene.) - Oh and the flash is frozen with a female (I assume Street Fighter) character saying "You mean. Tell Serena and Darien of her impending doom?"
I have absolutely no idea what the point was of this flash, but the writing is horrible. You need to time your dialogue better. Sound quality needs tremendous improvement. And you need to make it so people can actually watch the entire flash without it freezing.
0 stars.