Briliant story but the animation and drawing needs some work. Well done!
Not a bad job for your first flash. I gave it a three for a nice effort, with room for improvement of course. I look forward to seeing things from you in the future as your skills advance and you become a true artist.
Beautiful... really from all the new submissions this one really stood out. I was able to tell what the story was about without even reading your synopsis. Nice soundtrack, animation style was also excellent. Hope to see more submissions like these in the future.
Thanks, really appreciate it!