10seconds in and i dont think i needto say anything more, this video is worthy of submission and deserves a place amoung the channel.
Man, with such cool animation you should also invest into better soundquality (microphone for the voices and etc)
The mic is fine. Its the SWF. file. Newgrounds said they want sf's instead of .mov files. If you go here...
Thats my Youtube Channel. all the episodes are there as .mov files. Sound sounds great ;)