I expected porn at the end.
I'll try to be constructive here, but remember this is somewhat based on my own opinion as well: The art work in this video was pretty well done, mostly the background art. It seems to me that this was a tester animation. The sound effects were definitely cut and paste sounds, that were used too often. The overall flow of the animation was slow and hard to really get into. I think voice casting and a better flow/plot would make this anim a lot better. I don't think this submission should be banned, but I do think it needs more work.
animation gud--- but did he do it wid da dolphin?